Story present to proudly a novel by Yong Fenlon, published in 2024. It is a fiction that mixed with real story, fantasy to add dreamed, and magic realism that happed to Girl named Elsie's to imagine. Based on crafting own fascinating stories. The novel is set in currently and follows the adventure of Yong Fenlon, known as author story, is quite imaginative and engaging here. It starts with a peaceful scene of Elise enjoying her coffee and the view of Los Angeles, then transitions into an intense moment when an earthquake strikes in her dreams. The appearance of the dragon adds a fantastical element to the story, which makes it even more captivating. Story will help readers visualize the scene more vividly, and character development. Elsie's actions and decisions tell stories a lot about her character, but also include more information about Elsie's thoughts and her feelings. For example, how does Elsie' feel when the earthquake starts? What are her thoughts when she sees the dragon? There is character's that the plot takes an exciting turn when the earthquake starts, and the dragon appears. Elsie has built up to these events more gradually to create suspense. Also, it would be interesting to know why Elsie decides to ride the dragon and where it takes her to the reader through the story. Certainly, there are some additional ways to enhance the here story like dialogue.